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Posted on March 4, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — 2 Comments

The Importance of Mood Boards

This painting of a pink lobster picture against a pink wall demonstrates how mood boards can spark creativity for your writing.

The Power of Visual Cues

If you use Pinterest, you may inherently understand the concept of a mood board without much explanation. As a lifelong reader who is pleased to see some fabulous cinematic interpretation of literary classics, I have come to appreciate the power and appeal of writers using mood boards as a visual tool.

As a fiction writer, mood boards can be invaluable in keeping the aesthetic of a novel in place. The tone of the novel is set by the words you choose to describe color, the details of items in the world, the movement of the people in it. With each of these word choices, you create the mood of a scene — sadness, joy, tension, betrayal, horror, lust. Use the power of visual cues to direct the imaginary world you are constructing.

What Goes on "Mood Boards"? How Do I Use One?

You can start small or large. Create boards for different characters, settings, or your overall world. Make them as complete, as full, as detailed as you need. What do you put on a mood board? Anything that seems inspiring or in place for the topic.

Example: LoTR Mood Board

If you had to create a mood board for the aesthetic of The Lord of the Rings movies, you might choose pictures from magazines or websites that look like Celtic jewelry and weapons; perhaps audio clips of people speaking Welsh or Old English; perhaps quotes about bravery, honor, friendship, duty, or destiny; perhaps hand-drawn art of fantasy creatures. You might notice a pattern of colors that include forest green, cognac brown, tarnished silver, copper, cobalt blue, and angelic white.

You would put, in short, the textual elements that create the mood or tone achieved in the whole text.

What mood might the elements on this imaginary LoTR mood board create? I see: Antiquated, a bit barbaric, mysterious, perhaps dangerous, and full of curiosities.

Example: "The Road" Mood Board

If you had to create a mood board for the visual aesthetic of The Road, you might choose images of apocalyptic urban deserts; the scent and feel of ash in the air (if it were possible to “pin” such things in place); audio of fearful whispers; perhaps black and white close-up images of a man’s sad eyes; perhaps quotes about loneliness, regret, terror, pride, and nameless love. Except for a few scenes, all colors are greyed, washed out, ashen.

(Tangent: whether you’re a movie-watcher or a page-turner, check out all of Tolkien and McCarthy‘s masterpieces. Just sayin.)

Think Ahead: Mood Boards as BTS Content

You may have heard one of the “new truths” about self-publishing: consistent and dedicated self-promotion is the only way your book will sell. (This CNET article is an oldie but still offers some of the most solid advice out there. #19 is right on the money.) After you publish, you can forever be a salesman of your handmade product. So, even while you’re writing that manuscript, think seriously about marketing, promotion, and social media content you want to post during the publication process and after its release.

One fun way to share the writing experience with your readers is to show them #bts (behind-the-scenes) content, such as your edited #wip (work-in-progress) or your mood board. It personalizes, creates excitement, and can help your readers become immersed in the world of your writing.

Post a few pictures of mood boards at different stages. Save a few for “throwbacks” or VIP BTS content. If your creativity is visual and interactive, feed it and see how it levels up your next WIP.

Need professional review, beta read on your early draft, grammatical edits, or help developing characters or plot?

Posted on February 25, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — Leave a comment

On Writing Children as Children

The importance of writing children as children.

It’s strange how, as adults, we forget that childhood is completely different. Oh sure, we romanticize and are nostalgic. We remember the taste of fresh lemonade on the summer afternoon, just as fireflies started to glow. But, do you really remember what you worried about? What you misunderstood and how it affected your world and your interactions? When writing children, you have to consider how your adult perspective may be limited.

Children base their assumptions about things they have no experience with on things that they do have experience with. Some children take words and phrasing super-literally, and some children grapple with abstract concepts longer than others. Like adults, children vary in speed, intelligence, sense of humor; unlike adults, children do not logically process consequences, conclusions, outcomes, results, or long-term effects. Children do not have words to express their emotions or the way they understand something. Children do not have the experience to contextualize.

Simply, children aren’t little adults.

So don’t write children as if they were little adults.

Writing Tip of the Day:

Spend Time with Children if You're Writing Children.

There’s nothing like spending time with children. Engage them in some games, crafts, or other activities. It can completely reset your mind and refresh your vision. Or it can give you creative new ways to phrase the feelings that accompany frustration, rage, outrage, surprise, and humor. It can give you the truest depictions of joy, an insight into the focus of pure absorptive learning, or a deeper understanding of the constant energy demands that children place on adults.

Whatever you learn, it will improve your authenticity when writing children and parents; it will improve how you tell their stories, speak their lives through their dialogue, and enact them on the page. The best research is hands-on. Observe, listen, and soak up people of all ages if you will be writing about people of all ages; it’s the best way to make them whole.

Experienced Editor who Is also a Mom

Posted on February 11, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — Leave a comment

The Importance of Music in Writing

Every song tells a story, has a story, can take you on a journey. If it’s good. If the music resonates. If it hits home. When incorporating music in writing, think beyond just the pop songs that surround you; think of all the harmonies of the world.

No matter what you’re writing, the world of your words is rich with sounds. The music of life. Car horns, voices, wind. The music written into your world (both fiction and nonfiction) makes it rich, makes it real, gives it texture and emotion.

Consider the soundtrack for your story. It is a microcosm for the journey your characters take. This means that each character who is important enough deserves her/his own soundtrack.

It also means: You must consider what you listen to when you write. It can affect your mood, your word selection, your pacing, the direction of your story. Let it. Choose wisely.

Writing Tip of the Day: Character Soundtracks

Consider creating yourself a playlist (or two, or as many as you need) to put you into the right mindset for writing. Not just of music but of nature sounds as well. Rhythmic beats. Bird calls.

Maybe one character is an angry, aggressive teenager. Create a heavy metal playlist to listen to when writing him.

Maybe one character is the quirky, adventurer type, and you think polka fits her personality. Create a polka-for-adventures, music-for-fiction-writing playlist, and get into her groove when you’re writing her dialogue.

Maybe another character is a new mom, and you want to give her lullabies to sing to her baby late at night. Listen to what she would listen to, and feel what she feels in order to write her so the reader can hear her.

Explore, listen, save. Get out of your normal radio stations and discover deep cuts, live versions, and underground artists in genres you’ve never heard. Consider international music and let the sounds of other cultures impact your mental rhythms. Consider swing, classical, electronic, reggae, Mongolian throat singing.

Save some music that catches your attention and your creativity, and return to them for inspiration, for a change of pace, or to loosen up your thinking when writing fiction or nonfiction. You may be surprised how indulging yourself in sound can make your fingers dance across the page.

Posted on January 21, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — 1 Comment

On Being a Lifelong Reader

The World of a Child Bookgobbler

When people ask, “How many books have you read in your life?” I laugh. It’s all I can do. I’ve always been a reader.

My favorite book for a few of my childhood years was Black Beauty. The copy I had was 380-ish pages. On long car trips, I challenged myself to finish it in four hours. Then, I’d start it over. More than once, I read that book twice in a day.

“You’re going to need glasses by 25.”

I remember sitting down at a table at the library — probably in 5th grade or so — with a stack of books, which the other children looked at with disdain and confusion. “You’re going to actually read all those? Why?”

How do I answer that? What do you mean, why?

By that point, I had probably read more books than most of the adults I knew. But I didn’t know that.

“If you read any more, your eyes will cross.”

I set my school’s record for the Accelerated Reader program my 6th-grade year. More than 400 points earned. I remember I read Jurassic Park; college freshman level, worth 20 whole points. There was an article about me in the local paper. I got free pizzas at Pizza Hut.

How many books did I read that year? I don’t know. 50?

“Get your nose out of the book, bookworm.”

(Fun fact: bookworms are only kind-of a real thing.)

In 8th grade, I took freshman English, and freshman year I took sophomore English. Then junior-level English, then AP. I took humanities classes and philosophy and art history and sociology. All reading-heavy. I read textbook chapters twice to study for exams. As an undergrad, I taught myself to read a little Foucault in the original French, for funsies.

“Hey, Brainiac! Is there anything you haven’t read?”

As a grad student, I read about 1,000 pages per week. Three or four classes or reading groups or a pile of student essays. Each class went through about a book every week (maybe two weeks for a book sometimes), plus 100 pages or so worth of critical and historical articles. Then, there was the workload from teaching.

As a mother, I’ve read my son between two and ten books at bedtime, pretty much every night of his life. Not to mention, the reading that has happened during the daylight hours.

“Ok, really. Put it down already, word nerd.”

Could I even take a wild guess at how many books I’ve read? Does 5,000 seem unreasonable? A wild guess at how many pages I’ve read in my life?… I don’t know; a cool million? Does that seem like too much? Not enough? … does a reader really ever admit when it’s “too much”?

The World of a Reader Today

It seems that now, when the publishing era has been transformed and there is more content than ever before, I find less and less to actually, well, read. In reference to an old Janeane Garofalo joke, there may be more content these days, but there’s far less substance. (Watch it here. The joke starts around 12:45 and goes to about 16:30.)

Maybe it’s the same amount of substance, buried in the diamond mines owned by the modern content machine. Harder than ever to find, more precious than ever before.

It seems that far more of what I picked up as a child was gold. Perhaps I’ve edited the boring, the banal, the sluggish from my mind. Maybe I’ve simply forgotten the sludge I trudged through, carrying the jeweled memories I keep now in my heart’s inner treasure box.

A life spent as a reader creates a life unlike any other.

Reading — reading well and in large quantities — has supported every other thing in my life for as long as I can remember. Deep reading, truly connecting with words, has always connected me with my true self, with the world around me, and ultimately, with triumph in my endeavors, both on and off the page.

Reading makes an open world effortless. Go. Travel to any continent, through time, and into people, as effortlessly as a wish. Human storytelling and its effect on the individual is limitless. You can partake; it’s as easy as opening your eyes.

See the pages in front of you? They’re there for you. Entering them, embracing the journey as a reader, may change your life. They may become your new favorite destination and companion.

Or, they could be crap. It’s always a risk.

The reward is worth that risk.

The other half of writing is editing.

Posted on January 14, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — 3 Comments

The Importance of Research in Writing

If you are wrong about something obvious, people notice. That is why research in writing is essential. People will call you out for inaccuracy in your book. They will remember at the end of your book that there were unforgivable mistakes, and if they review your book at all, they will let others know. Worse, they won’t read anything else you write.

Cringe-Worthy Editing Mistakes

I’ll never forget, as a teenage reader working my way through a Stephen King novel, when the character turned on the radio to hear a song from the band “Arrowsmith.” Or when, as a younger editor, I was stumped over how to rewrite a vital scene in a novel that incorporated a mechanical garage door and motorized trucks into something happening in the 1870s.

Of course, it is the duty of a good editor to catch anachronisms, misspellings of real-world locations and people, or factual inaccuracies. But you will make your writing stronger and your editing process simpler by confirming these easily-Googleable things yourself

Writing Tip of the Day: Perform a round of fact-checking edits.

Research in writing and editing ~~can~~ should be its own step. Once the bulk of your manuscript is written and you’ve performed a round of line edits and edits for consistency and style, read through the entire thing again and make notes to yourself about (or highlight) things that need to be confirmed. Then, work your way backward, from end to beginning, and address only the items you’ve commented on.

Some things to keep in mind to confirm:

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Spelling of real-world locations, people, technology, documents, texts, companies, and other nonfiction stuff.

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Historical and geographic accuracy. Confirm that you’re not placing anachronisms into your text, especially if it’s historical fiction. Make sure that buildings or bridges (or roads or monuments) were built by the year of your novel; make sure that you don’t introduce technology before it existed; make sure that characters in your setting realistically have access to items mentioned — like an architectural design, a plant in the environment, or a design of clothing.

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If you describe the details of any business or technological process, you’ll need to confirm the exact spelling and usage of tools, technology, and references. Even if you describe the cursory elements of something complex, check all your information.

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Quotes. If you quote from a real-life person, book, or film, or especially from the Bible, you’ll want to check your exact wording and reference. If you’re paraphrasing, don’t use quotation marks, because the reader expects that with quotation marks comes exact wording.

You can't skip the research in writing

I mean, I guess you can. But then, expect to pay more for a thorough edit. Because your editor will do the research for you. So ultimately, the research can’t be skipped.

A good editor should always help the writer avoid looking foolish, and there is no quicker way to make both the writer and editor look foolish than a correction that could have been made after a two-second search online.

Chances are, even when you perform this fact-check round of edits yourself, you will miss information that seems common sense or automatic to you. An editor who really is working for you and your best interest won’t let that missed information make its way to the reader.

So that’s my second writing tip of the day: find yourself an editor who truly works for you and the best interest of your manuscript. You won’t regret it.

Posted on January 7, 2019November 11, 2023 by Cortni Merritt, M.A. — 5 Comments

Creative Notes: Scrap Heaps & Your Writing

Every writer’s process is different. There are millions of words written about creating a process that works for you, one to help you stay organized and on track to meet deadlines and goals. Creative notes are one of those organizational tools you might hear about, called by many different names.

Nearly all creative writers mention that they use a notebook of some kind to keep ideas. Call it what you will — an idea pad, writing journal, scrap pile, “book book,” story binder — many, many writers have one. And they can be a lifesaver when you’re looking for inspiration.

What Do You Mean "Creative Notes" or "Scrap Heap"?

It’s where you jot down the snippets of dialogue you hear in your head or overhear at the mechanic shop. It’s where the brainstorming and character descriptions are recorded. It’s where you might keep your best metaphors or similies, just waiting to be used, like a backup toothbrush in its packaging under the sink.

This scrap heap is essential. You’ll return to it again and again as the plot develops, you figure out which character best suits that great one-liner, and how all the pieces ultimately fit together.

Add to the scrap

Don’t let great words clutter your mind. Release them onto the page. They’ll be ready when you need them.

One of my favorite notetaking tools is Evernote. It’s simple for me and lets me record audio notes when I’m driving and talking through an issue, or snip items from the web for a mood board, if I’m trying to set a particular scene.

Of course, find a method that works for you. Although I love creative writing by hand, it is far less searchable than digital. So even when the mood strikes me to record my thoughts with pen and paper, I ultimately end up typing it into Evernote a couple days later, as the scrap makes its way into the working draft.

Writing Tip of the Day: Drafting Challenges

What kinds of things should you keep in the creative notes in your writer’s journal? How do you collect a rich trove of work-in-progress scrap to mold into something?

Write or record descriptions of people you know. Reflect on real people in your life and write similes to describe them. Does he move like a bird? Does she sing like a waterfall? Is she hungry like the wolf? Go into detail about a person using all the comparisons you can. Then, when it comes time to build characters, choose similes that fit, then expand them. (The fun part is combining elements of different people you know to create a totally-fictional-yet-still-real person.)

Art direct three key locations. If your story is like most, the number of locations will be limited and several will repeat. Think of yourself, dear Writer, as dressing a film set for three locations. Create a separate list of descriptions, items, and feelings associated with each location. What is it like to be in the room, standing at that cliff edge, or crammed inside that car’s backseat? Use all five (+) senses and over-elaborate details. Then, as you draft and find yourself in one of those locations (again), you can grab a fresh descriptor or detail from your scrap pile.

Cool facts or quotes. Of course, never use a quote without giving credit. And always confirm the accuracy of your facts. But, that being said, when you hear a piece of trivia, a unique origin story to a mundane item, a tale local to an area or in danger of being lost to history, save it for later. Even if it’s just a question to remind yourself (like, “Heard that spiders can see UV light. Is that true?” or “DYK: whiteout was invented at a kitchen table by accident.”) you can research later and unravel an entire path of creativity you may have forgotten about if you had not thrown it in your creative notes scrap pile.

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